今天造的句，求英语达人帮忙修改下。
先进的定量数据分析 （克莱姆，D，2003年） 为例，教我如何分析更定量的数据，使我可以使用他们好得多。它还可以帮助我找出哪些数据是很有帮助，哪一个是垃圾。统计方法的意义在社会研究 (杨、 K.2010） 给社会研究的几种方法。根据阅读的我们可以在社会中有信息研究的进展。这本书的定性研究 (Boeije，H.2010) 的分析，我知道如何定性研究的重要，让我有研究的初步知识。通过学习这些方法，我们可以更好地分析大学生就业的社会问题。因此，它可以采取更有效的措施。
O(∩_∩)O~ 我基本上用的是同义句，所以大体上意思是没有多大出入的。希望能帮到你O(∩_∩)O哈哈~
For instance,Advanced Quantitative Data Analysis (Cramer, D, 2003) can tell me how to analyse a date and help me find whether it is useful or not.So that I'll make full use of them.Making Sense of Statistical Methods in Social Research (Yang, K. 2010) teachs you some methods in social research.Based on it ,we can know better about information research in social.The book of Analysis in Qualitative Research (Boeije, H. 2010)let me realize the importance of qualitative research .Morever,it makes me gain the essential knowledge about research.By learning these methods,we are deemed to analyse the social problems about employment of the college students much better .In this way,we are supposed to take measures more purposefully
Why did you choose our university?
Firstly,shanghai is one of the chinese cities with a large concentration of universities,and I want to be a professional manager in near future in this city.
Secondly, XX university is among top national universities of projiect 211.And in the management school ,there are many outstanding professors and teachers.I would be honored to study here.
低级错误 不谢
1.The book is divided into 15 chapters. The first five are about the past of China, the second five concern the present of China, and the last five discuss the past of China.（注意标点符号的使用；避免不必要的重复。）
2. Two police officers visited your house this morning.（a pair of 很少用于人。）
3. (After) being informed of his exam results, he was filled with excitement. （After 在这里可以省掉。）
4. My university boasts a huge and fabulous campus.
5. The Qing Dynasty was toppled in the year of 1912.（应该是1911年。）
6. I never participated in any social activity during my college years.（activity用复数么？—— 单数就好。）
7. Have you ever experienced the pain of being betrayed?
8. The little boy likes eavesdropping outside the bedroom of his parents.
9. They were taken to task by people who abhorred incest.(abhor用什么时态？——过去时就好。）
10. Because of their lack of money, they decided to foster the child rather than adopt him.（在通常情况下，because of......放在主句后面比较好。这是讲英语的思维习惯。）
英语不错。努力更上一层楼！
I never participated in any social activity during my college years 应当加 have participated
把years 去掉，理由是重复，没必要加years,any social activity 单数是正确的，
The little boy likes eavesdropping outside the bedroom of his parents
我 建议用 overhear,理由是eavedrop 有窃听，贬义的色彩．＼
foster the child rather than adopt him. 这一句什么意思？没弄明白．
A pair of police officers visited your house this morning.
是 什么意思？不明白．vist 不如用 call at
1.The book is divided into 15 chapters, the first five parts are about the past of China, the second five ones center around the present of China, and the last five ones discuss the past of China.
4. My university boasts a huge and spacious campus.
6. I have never participated in any social activity during my college years.（activity不用复数）
8. The little boy is fond of eavesdropping outside the bedroom of his parents.
9. They were taken to task by people who abhorred incest.(因为前面是过去式，后面也要保持时态的一致性，abhor用过去时）
10. Lack of money, they decided to foster the child rather than adopt him,没必要加because of多此一举，lack of money放在前面就可以表原因
做得非常好，你的英语学得很棒。
2. A pair of police officers visited your house this morning.
这个句子意义不是很明确，警察来访指的是什么？是来看房子还是来找人？如是来找人用called at your house 比较好。
6. activity 用复数比较好，而且句子变成过去完成时 - I had never participated... 说起来更舒服。
9. abhor 用一般现在时，不用过去时。如果用过去时表明这些people 在过去是痛恨乱伦的，现在不一定或不是了。
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