求英文高手帮忙，做一篇作文，我语法很差，错误太多...
句子中逗号太多,英文不是中文,不能直翻.中国人能明白,外国人就不成了.英文里叫run-on 能不能把中文给我看看,我来给你翻译一下
标题：根据题意应该是随笔的意思，建议用Essay.或者Informal essay
adjust myself 不妥，adjust是调整的意思，不能说调整人，应该是其他的东西，例如心情、状态等等adjust onself to sth.或者adjust 加物主代词加名词，searching too many excuses 用making too many excuses.更好。
for another our company have fail us.这句有点奇怪，不知道本来是要表达公司让我们失望还是公司欺骗了我们？如果是让我们失望，建议改成for another,our company upsets us a lot.如果是欺骗了我们，那大概是单词打错了？是 have fooled us?
when talking about the high unemployment.这里的谈到并不一定是真的谈了，而主要是指想到，论及，考虑到，建议用when considering the high unemployment.
As a single 中的single 是形容词，要改成singlehood。,I can’t not being together with family此处多了一个not.而且can后面要跟动词原形，应该是,I cannot be together with family或,I can’t be together with family。而且此处用动作比用状态要好，所以可以用get together with family.,
though it is my choice,but the cost of living is really unable to bear.此处关联词搭配不当，在英语中同组关联词只用一个，即有虽然没但是，有但是没虽然，且句首大写,bear不够准确，改为afford更好。应该为Though it is my choice, the cost of living is really hard to afford.
it seems to be impossible，此处it指代不明，是结婚不太可能还是继续发展不太可能，还是她爱我不太可能？
no matter how,If she do not leave, I will not abandon.此句 no matter how后缺形容词，如艰难 tough 绝望 desperate
I had the honor to read your email the same day and I have known that you plan to leave for China with your parents for a tour to Huangshan Mountains. I suggest that you fly directly to Hefei, capital of Anhui Province, and then take a sight seeing bus from there. It is 280 kilometre from Hefei to huangshan. You'd better bring some raincoats with you, for it often rains there. Besides a camera needs carying with you; you see there are much beautiful scenery worthy of taking. Yupin Peak (玉屏峰) and Tiandu Peak (天都峰) are two of the most ones, so you might as well pay a vist to them at first. I am looking forward to your coming early.
with highest regards.
Your,
Liyuan
我当天就拜读了你的邮件并且知道你计划揩同你的父母来华到黄山旅游。我建议您直接飞往安徽首府合肥，然后从那里乘旅游车，从合肥到黄山只有280公里。你最好带上雨衣，那里经常下雨。另外你需要带一个照相机，你知道那里有好多美景要拍。玉屏峰和天都峰是最美的景色中的两处，你倒不妨先去看看。我正期待着你们早点儿到来。
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字数的要求呢
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