英语句型分析。求高手帮忙分析下面两句话，本人觉得有些不通顺。
In order to help her sister XiaoPeng to achieve her Olympics dream, YangYang always came to the pool and cheered her, and made good effort to earn more money for family expenses so that Xiao Peng can concentrate on training. KaiKuo was a boy who delivered food for deaf athletes. He noticed that YangYang and her sister were communicating with hand language. He started to talk to her and asked for YangYang' MSN. In order to made himself a chance, he saved a share of food for YangYang everyday. He was moved by Yang Yang's selflessness for her sister, so he wanted to help her and give her happiness. He made his parents to accept himself to be seeing a deaf girl. Then he brought her home. Out of nowhere, his parents wrote a sentence for YangYang: Would you marry him? YangYang then opened her mouth and said: I do! At that moment they all knew: It's just her sister who cann't hear sounds, and YangYang always thought that Tian Kuo couldn't hear. His parents asked:" So what were you talking before?" They looked at each other and then smiled. At this moment, a sentence appeared on the screen: Love and dream are wonderful things, you can feel them without hearing, speaking and translating.
工作分享指的情况，划分责任一人—工作时间。2人们自愿担任兼职工人足够小时，他们履行职责的全职工人。如果他们每个工作一半的工作，例如，他们每人获得50%的工作的工资，假期和其他福利的。工作分享不同于传统的兼职工作，它主要发生在高度熟练和专业领域，需要更高层次的责任和员工的承诺。工作分享不应该混淆的术语工作分享，指的是增加了一些工作的时间减少每个现有的工作，从而提供更多的职位，越来越多的人失业。工作分担，相比之下，并非旨在解决失业问题；其重点，相反，是提供高薪工作的技术工人和专业人士谁想要更多的自由时间的其他活动。正如预期，大部分是妇女的工作分担者。进行的调查在1988个英国平等机会委员会表明，百分之78的共享者是女性，其中大部分是20至40岁。随后的研究得到了类似的结果。许多这些妇女重新进入就业市场后，有了孩子，但他们决定不寻求兼职工作，因为这将意味着较低的地位。分担工作，也提供了一个可接受的移回到全职工作，经过长时间的缺席。必须密切合作交流时的工作与另一人做实际工作完全不同于传统的一个位置的工作。然而，确保一个更大的机会，这种伙伴关系将成功，每个人都需要知道的长处，弱点和喜好他或她的伴侣之前申请一个职位。此外，必须有一个公平分配都例行任务和有趣的人。总之，一个位置是job-shared，俩个人都必须匹配良好，而且必须平等相待。
== They MUST remain (系动词) Separate （形容词表语） or my career will die.翻译：必须分割它们，否则我的职业生涯就完蛋了
这是强调句的一种形式，把关键词separate放在句子的开头。
Nature knows not defeat.
翻译：大自然不懂什麼是失败。 / 老天爷不同情失败的人。
楼主的感觉是对的，这句话的确有语病。
应当将separate改为过去分词separated
正确语序为：They must remain（be）separated or my career will die
译文：他们必须被分开，否则我的事业就完了。自然规律使然（谁也无法战胜自然规律）。
希望对你有所帮助。
第一句：there is only one option, one is they remain, the other is my career dead.
第二句：no one could win the Nature.
Natuer 大写指的是大自然。
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