急！请英语高手帮忙解答一下一个英语问题，在线等，非常感谢！

作者&投稿：茅骆（联系方式在网页底部的电邮联系）

急！请英语高手帮忙解答一下一个英语问题，在线等，非常感谢！~

Task:Study
the
following
sentences
and
try
to
improve
them.
任务：仔细阅读以下句子并尝试改进它们。
1.We
thought
she
was
charming,intelligent,and
a
very
capable
young
woman.
我们认为她是个迷人、聪明和很有能力的女人。
改为：We
thought
she
was
charming,
intelligent,
and
very
capable.
2.Looking
out
of
the
window,the
grassland
stretches
as
far
as
the
eye
can
see.
向窗外望去，草场绵延不绝直至视力所及。
改为：Outside
the
window,
the
grassland
stretches
as
far
as
the
eye
can
see.
3.On
entering
the
classroom,the
students
stood
up
and
said“Good
morning!”
（老师）进了教室，学生们起立并说“早上好！”
改为：When
the
teacher
entered
the
classroom,
the
students
stood
up
and
said
"Good
morning!"
4.I'm
going
to
the
lecture
on
modern
Chinese
drama,because
he
is
a
dramatist
I
like.
我要去上现代中国戏剧讲座，因为他是我喜欢的剧作家。
改为：I'm
going
to
the
lecture
on
modern
Chinese
drama,
because
the
lecturer
is
a
dramatist
I
like.
5.We
have
great
faith
and
high
hopes
for
her.
我们对她寄予厚望。
改为：We
have
great
faith
in
and
high
hopes
for
her.
6.It
is
better
to
give
than
take.
给予比索取好。
改为：It
is
better
to
give
than
to
take.

1.Born in a small town in South China in 1968,he grew up to become a(a要去掉，become+职业不加冠词) musician.
于1968年出生与中国南部小镇的他长大后成为一位音乐家。

2.The girl is too young. （问题应该是出在too上……其实口语里特定语境也可以用的，建议改做very）
这个女孩很年轻

3.We entered the shop,and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,and the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them. （Chinglish很严重的……建议改成and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves,of which the prices were quite reasonable,and a lot of customers were buying them.当然可能还有其他问题……）
我们进入商店，售货员向我们打招呼。各种各样的鞋摆在货架上，价钱非常合理，很多顾客在挑选它们。

4.He visited all the famous historical monuments of this ancient city,and he also found out that the people of the city had to pay heavy taxes. （我觉得问题可能出在find out上，这个词我们学的是经过努力或者运算得出结论，而不是简单的发现，建议改为find）
他参观了这座古老城市所有有名的历史遗迹，而且发现这里的市民要付很重的税。

5.Shakespeare was one of the greatest dramatists.
（我觉得这道题的问题出在greatest上，可能出题人觉得英语的最高级有排他性，其实这句话我觉得是对的。）
莎士比亚是最伟大的戏剧家之一。

6.The singing in the film is good and the actors act wonderfully well. （这句话很难改……有一句话是The play is acting wonderfully well. 这个剧本上演非常成功。可能是IN这个介词有问题吧……或者把ACT改成PERFOEMENCE。希望大家指教。）
电影中音乐很好，演员演出非常出色。

7.Jane is better at singing English songs.（be good at不能写成be better at）JANE非常擅长英语歌曲。

改错题（修改句子）
1. 在a和very之间加was（这题不是太肯定，如果只改一处就只能这样修改。感觉句子不太通顺，最好是改成We thought she was a very capable young woman, charming and intelligent）
2. eye变成复数eyes
3. On改成Upon （这是语法上的修改，但根据实际情况，我觉得前面部分应该改成When the teacher entered the classroom）
4. 这句语法上没有错，后面半句可以考虑改成because I like that dramatist
5. 在faith后面加in
6. take前面加to

Task:Study the following sentences and try to improve them.
任务：仔细阅读以下句子并尝试改进它们。
1.We thought she was charming,intelligent,and a very capable young woman.
我们认为她是个迷人、聪明和很有能力的女人。
改为：We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.

2.Looking out of the window,the grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.
向窗外望去，草场绵延不绝直至视力所及。
改为：Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.

3.On entering the classroom,the students stood up and said“Good morning!”
（老师）进了教室，学生们起立并说“早上好！”
改为：When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said "Good morning!"

4.I'm going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama,because he is a dramatist I like.
我要去上现代中国戏剧讲座，因为他是我喜欢的剧作家。
改为：I'm going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama, because the lecturer is a dramatist I like.

5.We have great faith and high hopes for her.
我们对她寄予厚望。
改为：We have great faith in and high hopes for her.

6.It is better to give than take.
给予比索取好。
改为：It is better to give than to take.

这个题目是让你修改句子：

1. We thought she was a charming, intelligent and capable young woman.
我们认为她曾经是个迷人、聪明和有能力的年轻女人。

2. Out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.
窗外的绿草地一直延伸到眼睛看不到的地方。

3. The students stood up and said "good morning" when the teacher entered the classroom.
当老师走进教室的时候，学生们站起来说早上好。

4. I'm going to the lecture on Modern Chinese Drama because i like the lecturer, who is a dramatist.
我打算去上现代中国戏剧课，因为我喜欢那个老师，他是个剧作家。

5. We have great faith and hopes to her.
我们对她怀有高度的信任和希望。

6. It'd better to give than take.
要知道付出，而不是不停的获取。

1.把 a 放到charming 前面
we thought she was a charming, intelligent and very capable young woman. 我们觉得她是一个很迷人，聪明并且非常有能力的年轻女士。
2 3 同上
4 把on 换成of 或者直接说modern Chinese drama lecture,
后半部分可以说 because i like the dramatist.
5 同上

任务：把下列句子改为倒装语序。
1、There
stood
the
headmaster.
校长站在那儿。
2、Hardly
could
I
recognize
him.
我几乎认不出他来了。
3、Rushed
out
the
students
when
the
English
class
was
over.
英语课一结束，同学们就冲了出去。
4、On
the
top
of
the
hill
stood
a
small
tree.
山顶上有一棵小树。
5、So
clear
is
the
notice
that
it
cannot
be
misunderstood.公告说的很清楚了，不会被误解的。
关于倒装句，如果还有不懂的，可以继续问我：）

生活记录网

急！请英语高手帮忙解答一下一个英语问题，在线等，非常感谢！

相关热门