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第 5 篇
When you plan a tour, there are two types of schedules that you need to produce : a general or national schedule and a local schedule. The general schedule outlines the entire tour throughout the country. If your company is an organizing travel agency, you will be responsible for developing the national route. If your company does not organize the tour, you are only responsible for planning a local tour. The general tour schedule will be provided to you, which outlines the cities to be visited, dates and time of arrival and departure, airline flights, hotels and local travel agencies that will be used as well as the major sites to be visited. Usually it is general and does not have many details. The working of local schedule will include the real details of the tour.
我的复述:
There are two types of tours within your planning, one is a local schedule and the other is a general or national schedule. They are rather different. If your company is the organising tour operator, then all routes will be design and responsible by you, which would include a general schedule outlines of the entire tour throughout the country. If not, you only need to organise and responsible for planning a local tour. But the working of local schedule will include the real details of the tour, and your general tour schedule would have including: outlines the cities to be visited, dates and time of arrival and departure, airline flights, hotel and local travel agencies that will be used as well as the major sites to be visited. They usually are general and don’t not have many details.

第 6 篇
A local schedule can be divided into two parts; the tourist schedule and your working schedule. Once the national schedule is known, local travel companies will put together the local schedules. These should include sites to be visited, hotels and restaurants to be used, dates and time for arrival and departure, meals, free time, etc. This schedule should be written in a way that the tour leader could understand and use it to inform the group about each day's activities. Again, if you do a thorough job in preparing this schedule, it will save you lots of time each day by not having to go over the day's schedule with the tour leader.
我的复述:
There are tourist schedule and your working schedule—— two types of local schedule, which once the national schedule is known, local travel companies will put together the local schedules. They may include sites to be visited, hotels and restaurants to be used, dates and time for arrival and departure, meals, free time, etc. A well planned schedule should be written in a way that the tour leader could understand and use it to inform the group about each day's activities. It will save you lots of time each day by not having to go over the day's schedule with the tour leader, if you do a thorough job in preparing this schedule.
第 7 篇
The second half of the local schedule should be a detailed working schedule for your own use. If you are the guide that will be with the tourists presenting information and taking care of their daily needs, you will need an hourly schedule for the entire time that you will be with them. The more detailed it is, the easier it will be for you to make the tour run smoothly. You should try to think of everything that you would need to do during the time your guests are with you and write it into the schedule. When you have this done, you should look at your schedule to try to find all the places that you might have problems. Try to think of all the problems that you might have. You won't be able to think of all of them. There will always be things coming up that you did not expect. But you can foresee many of them. Try to come up with possible ways that you can take care of these problems before you have them. This will greatly reduce the amount of time you spend trying to solve problems after your guests arrive.
我的复述:
Your local schedule also should be divided into two parts, which the second half should be a detailed working schedule for your own use. They are your detailed hourly work of the whole time with the tour party if you are the guide that will be with them presenting information and taking care of their daily needs. Try to be more detailed if you want the tour to go more smoothly. Write things down might be required by your guests or consider of them by yourself during the tour. Pre-plan to tackle all potential problem it may arise from places you are about to visit with your guests. Expect the unexpected and be able to overcome it. Be prepared before your guests arrive, this way you can save yourself a lot time.
第 8 篇
The last thing that you have to do, after you have made your tour plan, is to make the reservations and arrangements for all the services that you will use during your tour. If you have a thorough plan, all you need to do is to go down the plan, step by step, and contact everyone who will provide a service. Tell them everything that they need to know, such as dates, time, number of people, etc. You should spend plenty of time making these arrangements and make sure these service providers write down your instructions. It is better if you provide them with written instructions and note any special requests or agreements that you have agreed upon.
我的复述:
Make the reservations and arrangements for all the services that you will use during your tour is the last thing that you have to do, after you have made your tour plan. All you need to do is to go down the plan, step by step, if you have a thorough plan, and contact everyone who will provide a service. Inform them what they need to know, such as dates, time, number of people, etc. It is better that if you provide them with written instructions and note any special requests or agreements that you have agreed upon with them. And you should spend plenty of time making these arrangements making sure that these service providers write down your instructions.
第 9 篇
Getting people's attention and holding it while you are presenting information to them is a skill that takes time to develop. The easiest way to lose their attention is to bore them. No tour guide ever intentionally wants to bore his- guests, but it can happen quite often if you don't pay attention to what your guests are interested in. Tourists can become bored for other reasons as well. But the point is that whenever people are bored, you will lose their attention, and it will be very difficult for you to get them to do what you want them to. So, knowing this, one of the easiest ways to get people to follow you is to get them interested in what you are saying or doing. They will stay with you so that they don't miss anything.
我的复述:
The skill of drawing everyone’s attentions are paying more attention to them and keep on doing so, but it takes a long time to achieve and develop. Bore them is the easiest to lose their attention. Even though you don’t want to bore your guests, but often you couldn’t help yourself and bored them without intention. Once they are bored, it would hard for you to get them following your instruction and feel less interested and thus would enjoy much less with the tour. Therefore boring your guests is the last thing you should do. Try to be more creative and make the tour more interesting and offer your guests extra more and make sure they don’t miss anything!
第 10 篇
You are responsible for the group's safety. You are their guide. Tourists are not familiar with your country and its culture. Many aspects of your daily life are very different from what they are used to. Common everyday aspects of your life can be very dangerous for them. For example, just crossing any city street may seem like a simple thing for you, but it is quite difficult for tourists who come from places that have different traffic laws and very few bicycles. Tourists are likely to be hit by bicycles when they think that the bike will stop for them. Tourists often walk along gazing at everything else but where they are going. Without your warnings, they will often walk into things, and fall down.
我的复述:
Now about safety, this is the most important part being a tour guide. They are also your responsibilities as well for making sure about your guests apart from enjoyed themselves while staying with you and also you should keep them safe. Always pay a lot of attention and more considerate and do your best to protect your guests from getting injuries. Tourists are the most curious lots, which they may pay more attention to sights and sceneries than where they are going, so, easily walk into something and might hurt themselves. Always remind them to watch their ways. And warn them about our different traffic laws and potential dangerous transport on our roads.

I found that it was difficult for me to write a letter to you in English.So I must be to make a long story short.
(写信首句最好表示一下问候，例如：It’s nice to write to you, but I found write in English is a little difficult for me . must在这里用得不够好，根据你的表达I want to tell a story to you firstly.）
A lovely bear has began to doubt why jilljingchen(首字母需大写) did not write to it in a long time.（这是我的修改：There’s a bear, he had a friend named JillJing Chen. These days he is very astonished why his friend didn’t write back for a long time.）
Did your computer there not show the Chinese or you were really busy recently? (He thought and thought, maybe, his computer cannot show Chinese, or he is busy recent days)
So, first of all,(firstly才是首先的意思，而你表达的是毕竟的意思)you should tell me whether your computer can show the Chinese.（语气不够委婉，把should删掉，改成please tell me …） Then please tell me(换成I hope更好) you are find(fine) and healthy there because from your last letter I knowed（knew） you slept not well.
(Last time you told me that you didn’t sleep well ,so, I hope you are fine and healthy now.)

And I also want to know your situation ,for example, how do you go to school ,by walk , by bus or take the subway; how the old lady lives with you;or other interesting things you are happy to go shares with me.
在这里，我觉得除了询问他的状况外，你可以再添一些自己的生活现在，写信是一种沟通交流，不是咨询哈哈，多写点关于自己的，然后彼此可以寻找到共同点，才会有写信的乐趣。

OK!If you are busy indeed you needn't reply to this letter ,after all your healthy is the most important.finally best wish to you.
(I really want to know your recent life, so I hope to receive your letter soon. )写封回信又不需要多少时间，不会影响身体健康的啦哈哈，其实你还是很希望收到回信的，不是吗？那就表达出来，不用不好意思，呵呵。。
Yours,____
以上是我的一些修改和建议，本人水平有限，献丑了。Good luck!~

上星期五在我身上发生了一件有趣的事情。我要去伦敦购物。我想买一些圣诞礼物，我需要找到与我在大学的课程有关的一些书籍（你知道，我是一个学生）。我坐了一趟早班火车去伦敦，这样在下午早点的时候我就能买到我想要的一切。无论如何，我不是很喜欢伦敦，所有的交通和噪音。我得为晚上做一些安排。所以，我坐出租车去滑铁卢车站。我真的不能承受起出租车费，但我希望赶上3 : 30的火车。不幸的是的士堵车了，和我到滑铁卢的时候，火车已经走了。我不得不等一小时以等待下一班火车。我买了一份晚报，“标准”，流浪到车站吃自助餐。在一天中的那个时间胃几乎是空的，所以我买了一杯咖啡和一包饼干…巧克力饼干。我很喜欢巧克力饼干。有很多空桌子，我找到了一个靠窗的桌子。我坐下来开始做填字游戏。我总是喜欢做填字游戏。几分钟后一个男人坐在我对面。他除了很高之外没有什么特别的。事实上，他看上去像个典型的城市商人…你知道，黑色套装和公文包。我什么也没说，继续做我的字谜游戏。突然他越过桌子，打开我的那包饼干，拿了一个，把它浸在咖啡中放进他的嘴里。我简直不敢相信我的眼睛！我太震惊了而不知道说什么。无论如何，我不想小题大做，所以我决定忽略它。我总是尽可能避免麻烦。我只是自己拿起饼干继续我的填字游戏。当这个男人拿起第二块饼干，我没看，我没有发出一点声音。我假装很有兴趣的专注于难题。几分钟后，我不经意地伸出手，拿了最后一块饼干盯着这个男人。他使劲地盯着我。我紧张地把饼干在我嘴里，决定离开。我正准备起身离开时，那个男人突然推开椅子，站起来，匆匆忙忙地离开自助餐。我如释重负，决定等待两年或三分钟再走。我喝完咖啡，折叠起我的报纸，站起来。然后发现那里，在桌子上，我的报纸刚才所在的地方，是我的那包饼干。

祝楼主开心进步，希望对你有所帮助。^_^o~ ！

我上周五遇到一件趣事。我到伦敦去买东西去了。我想要一些圣诞节礼物，和我需要找一些书为我上大学的课程（可以看到我的学生）。我赶上早班火车到伦敦，所以下午我买了我想要的一切。不管怎么说，我不是很喜欢伦敦，所有的噪音和交通，和我取得了一些安排的那天晚上。所以，我乘出租车去（窝打老道）站。我真的不能负担得起的士，但我想 3: 30 培训。不幸的是，的士陷入交通堵塞，和我到窝打老道的时候，火车刚走。我不得不等待下一个小时。我买了一份晚报，'标准'，和对流浪到站自助餐。在当时是近空的一天，所以我买了一杯咖啡和一包饼干 … … 巧克力饼干。我很喜欢的巧克力饼干。有很多空表，我发现一个窗户附近。我坐下来，开始做填字。我总是喜欢做填字游戏。
几分钟后一个人我对面坐了下来。没有什么特别的他，他是很高。事实上，他看起来就像典型的城市商人 … … 你知道，黑色西装和公文包。什么也没说，与我填字下去。他突然伸手到桌子、打开我包饼干、花之一，伸入他的咖啡和弹出进他的嘴里。我不敢相信我的眼睛！太震惊说什么。不管怎么说，我不想惹麻烦，所以我决定忽略它。如果可以，我总是避免麻烦。我只是自己拿饼干，然后回到我填字。
当那人拿起第二次的饼干时，我没有看并没有响声。我假装很感兴趣。后几分钟，我随便伸出我的手，把最后的饼干和男子看了一眼。他盯着我疯狂地。我紧张地把饼干放在我的嘴，并决定离开。我正准备起身去当男子突然推他的椅子，站了起来，匆匆出的自助餐。我觉得很安心，并决定等待前将自己的两个或三分钟。我完成了我的咖啡、折我的报纸，站了起来。还有，在桌上，在我的报纸了，我包饼干。

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