求英语大神帮个忙。。分值可追加，80词左右。。急。。
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Last winter holiday,my parents and I had an opportunity to visit our beautiful capital—Beijing,I was very excited because this is my first time to go on a trip by plane.In this five-day-trip,we have to visit some famous places in Beijing:such as the Great Wall,the Palace Museum and so on.Though there were so many good places we can visit,but the there was a big wind in Beijing,too.So we have to covered ourselves with a lot of clothes(It looks like a snowman.)to keep out the cold wind,it was really difficult to stand the clothes! But luckily,we can get a good view of the Beijing City and we also had fun visiting the places we had to visit.In a word,we had a great time during the trip this time.A visit to Beijing let me know more about other places in our country and also makes me know more konwledge about the outside world,that was useful all my life. In a word,I love this trip,it was helpful and unfrogetable for me,it was fun!
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I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way. One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn't move any further. Nobody knew what to do. One girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area. Luckily we brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him rest in it. He took some medicine. Then he drank some water, and ate some food. After a while, he felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain.
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你刚脆先想好你要写的信内容写中文在这里然後我帮你翻成英文比较快
这样也显得你写信给朋友才有诚意咩!
good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.i am very glad to be here for your interview.my name is song yonghao,i am 22 years old .i come from luoyang,a very beautiful aicent city.my undergratuade period will be accomplished in chang'an university in july ,2004;and now,i am trying my best for obtaining a key to tongji university.
generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in. i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. when i was sophomore, i found web design very interesting, so i learned it very hard . to weaver a homepage for myself, i stayed with my pesonel computer for half a month.,and i am the first one in my class who own his homepage. forthermore,i am a person with great perserverence. during the days preparing for the first examination,i insist on running every day, no matter what the weather was like.and just owning to this,i could concentrate on my study and succeeded in the end.
well ,in my spare time ,i like basketball, tennis and chinese chess. also english is my favorate.i often go to english corner to practise my oral english on every thursday,and write compositions to improve my witten ability .but i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying.
ok, that is all,thank you for your attention.
my hometown------luoyang
i am from luoyang,a beautiful city in henan province. it is famous as the "capital of nine dynasties " and enjoy yhe honer that luoyang peony is the best in the world.
luoyang played a very important role in chinese history. so it has a profound cultural background and many great heritagesites have been well reverved. such as longmen grotto, one of the three grottoes in china ang white horse temple, being regarded as the cradle of chnese buddhism.
luoyang peony is world-famous. every year, many tourists travel to luoyang to see the beauty of peony .the people in my hometown are friendly, they welcome the travellers from all over the world.
i like my hometown very much.
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http://wenku.baidu.com/view/ad83292b647d27284b73510e.html
Hello everyone,
I am Ryan. I am *** years old. And as to my gender, you can tell it from my apearance. It is not so confusing. It is a great pleasure to know you all. I hope we can spend very pleasant years together. I am kind of introverted but I am nice. I would like to know all of you so that we all enjoy very precious memories years later. I am interested in movies, especially English and French movies. After my homework, I usually watch soap operas on my computer. It is so enjoyable for me. I advise you guys to try it because it is always a great pleasure to see new episodes of my favorite programs. Of course, one needs to go outside instead of staying indoors all day long. It is not healthy. For an alternative, I go out in the morning or in the evening, either it is a park, garden or the beach and mountains. I am interested in plants and animals. And I shoot pictures while travelling. I write blogs sometimes about my trips and experiences. You may think I am nerd, but that is my actual life. And I am also religious. I find some time to practise buddism each day, whether it is the chant or simply changing the water in front of the buddhas. I appreciate such kind of simple and meaningful life. As to my job, I mainly worked as a tutor. And I had short periods of selling experience as well. That is almost everything about me. And I am Ryan, as the character in the film Saving Private Ryan. Thank you all for your attention.
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