请高手搭救我----帮把下面的句子翻译成英语，谢谢！

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请英语高手帮我把下面的中文句子翻译成英语..,谢谢..~

如果某一天,
Perhaps some day

某人说爱你,
Someone says love you

她愿意给你爱和快乐.
She wants to give you love and happiness

那么你愿意给她拥有你的爱的资格吗?
Then, are you willing to give her all the rights to love you?

明天就要出发了。要过上自己一个人的生活。
算是对自己的一个磨练吧，让自己学会做人，反思以前的过错。熬一熬对自己是有好处的。
以后真的不能够在堕落下去了，因为一个人，什么都要靠自己，没有任何人能够帮到你，除了你自己。
爸妈，爷爷奶奶，大伯，叔叔，妹妹，还有对我有期望的人。
我一定会改好来，才回到大家的身边！
tomorrow i will move on,to live by myself.it's kind of practice,good for me.i can't kill time anymore,because you should work by yourself,no one can help you,excepe yourself.
father,mother,grandfather,grandmother,uncles,sister,and the ones who expect for me.
i will be better,and back to your side.

我并没有照原文遂句直译，那样的版本其它网友已有提供。我按你的情况改写了一下，使它更符合英语文化的表达方式，合用的话最好，不合用就搁着罢。
My shop is still pretty new and this product yields very little profit. I do hope that everyone who patrons my store will walk away satisfied. I would be extremely thankful if you could pardon me. Meanwhile, I have also prepared a little gift for you as a token of appreciation for the kindness you show me. Please accept my most sincere apologies for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you very much for your kind understanding.
我用了 pardon 而不是 forgive，因为估计你犯的只是小错误，还不至於要别人 forgive的程度。

It is my new store which makes a small profit.
Actually,I hope all the consumers will be satified with our service every time.
However,when we make mistakes,we hope you can forgive us;
and we will be grateful to send you a gift for our apologize and gratitude.
Thank you!
既然是一个店家的告示,就该简明,我根据你的意思翻译了一下.我在其中用了分句,以表示并列.
并将每个主要的句子分段落,使消费者易看明白.

my shop is new and the profit of this product is very thin .I hope everyone can satisfy with the product .if you can forgive my falts,i will be very grateful,at the same time ,I have a very special
present for you which sstands for my endness thank to you . thank you all

my shop is newly opened and the profit of this product is very little.i do hope that every buyer can be satisfied with my product.if you can forgive my mistake,i will be very thankful.at the same time,i will send you a pretty gift to show my apology.thank you !!希望能帮到你哦~~~

The store is new stores, this product little profit, I hope my every buyer can be satisfied, if you can forgive my fault, I would be very grateful, and at the same time, I also can have a nice present for you, and use it to say how sorry I am. Thank you!

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