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All respected sir/madam,
I am zhangsan ,a pathetic and hard-working butcher who is 58 years old ,from Hunan Province ,Chenzhou City.
Last month, when I was killing a pig ,all of a sudden ,I fell onto the ground unconsciously.At this moment ,my wife hurriedly sent me to see a doctor .Unfortunately ，the doctor told me that I suffered from lung cancer ,which was in late stage.
And the doctor reminded me again and again,”If you don’t take a timely and overall treatment,you will die within one and half years!”
But worse still, I have little money ,which is radically enough for my treatment in the hospital,for the treatment expense is tremendously high beyond my ability.
So ,here I am crying for your merciful help!
My bank account is :11919 119119 20120120.
Thanks a billion for your mercy again!
God blesses you!
Zhangsan
2011-4-3
我给人写的演讲稿
Environment is my top concern
Nowadays ,with the fantastic spurt of science and technolody,people worldwide are now live in a terrifically wonderful world of unprecedent prosperity!
Here ,I cannot help asking :what is your top concern in your deep heart ,from now on?
Your pocket?
Your lover?？
Your shares jumping up and down？？？
No！
As for me , my top concern is nothing more than the environment,a great presence bound up with all living creatures on our unique planet!!
As we can see,we now live in a progressively thriving world.However,we still are threatened by so many new rising serious problems at the same time!
Now ,let me take the booming tourism for example please! On the one hand, tourism, as one of the most promising industries in the 21st century, provides people with the great opportunity to see everything there is to see and to go any place there is to go. It has become a lifestyle for some people, and has turned out to be the driving force in GDP growth. It has the magic to turn a backward town into a wonderland of prosperity. But on the other hand, many problems can occur unexpectedly!
And the environmental problems rising from tourism are getting even worse than ever before!
In some districts，the environment has been largely contaminated：millions of tons of wastes are pouring into the environment alarmingly;the deforestation are still proceeding;the conservation areas of wild animals are disturbingly declining ……As a result ,the contradiction of the native people and wild lifes is deteriorating,so much so that the number of the people compelled to see a doctor are increasing tremendously!
At this point,it is high time that we adopted all possible and effective measures to cope well with this problem ,so as to make ourselves live in harmony with our environment!
So ,are you still hesitating?Let’s go hand in hand to make all things go right!
我给你谈谈怎样写作文吧
写作是本人的老本行！！六级作文115，我的英语老师多次在班上向同学推介我的作文，我的作文没有语法错误，有很多高级词汇。在这里跟阁下分享下吧
对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！
要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）
首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！
其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！
再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子。
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高考英语作文乱写凑字数最多能得0-5分。
高考英语作文，不管是全国卷，还是地方卷，都有明确的给分标准。给分标准基本是一致的。
一、一般一篇25分，字数要求150词的英语作文评分原则如下：
1． 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2． 评分时，可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3． 概要部分少于20词或多于40词；全文少于130词或多于180词的，从总分中酌情减去1-2分。
4． 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5． 拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6． 如字迹难以辨认，以致影响表达，将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档：（21—25分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
l 覆盖所有内容要点。
l 语法结构和词汇有个别小错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
l 有效地使用了衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档：（16—20分）
完成了试题规定的任务。
l 虽漏掉一、二个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
l 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
l 语法结构和词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
l 应用简单的语句间的衔接手段，全文结构紧凑，内容较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档：（11—15分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
l 虽漏掉一些内容，但基本覆盖主要内容。
l 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
l 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
l 应用简单的衔接手段，内容基本连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（6—10分）
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
l 漏掉或未清楚描述某些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
l 语法结构单一，所用词汇有限。
l 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对所写内容的理解。
l 较少使用衔接手段，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档（1—5分）
未完成试题规定的任务。
l 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
l 语法结构单一，所用词汇不当。
l 有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响内容理解。
l 缺乏语句间的衔接手段，内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。
0分：未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与试题要求内容无关或无法看清。
All respected sir/madam,
I am zhangsan ,a pathetic and hard-working butcher who is 58 years old ,from Hunan Province ,Chenzhou City.
Last month, when I was killing a pig ,all of a sudden ,I fell onto the ground unconsciously.At this moment ,my wife hurriedly sent me to see a doctor .Unfortunately ，the doctor told me that I suffered from lung cancer ,which was in late stage.
And the doctor reminded me again and again,”If you don’t take a timely and overall treatment,you will die within one and half years!”
But worse still, I have little money ,which is radically enough for my treatment in the hospital,for the treatment expense is tremendously high beyond my ability.
So ,here I am crying for your merciful help!
My bank account is :11919 119119 20120120.
Thanks a billion for your mercy again!
God blesses you!
Zhangsan
2011-4-3
我给人写的演讲稿
Environment is my top concern
Nowadays ,with the fantastic spurt of science and technolody,people worldwide are now live in a terrifically wonderful world of unprecedent prosperity!
Here ,I cannot help asking :what is your top concern in your deep heart ,from now on?
Your pocket?
Your lover?？
Your shares jumping up and down？？？
No！
As for me , my top concern is nothing more than the environment,a great presence bound up with all living creatures on our unique planet!!
As we can see,we now live in a progressively thriving world.However,we still are threatened by so many new rising serious problems at the same time!
Now ,let me take the booming tourism for example please! On the one hand, tourism, as one of the most promising industries in the 21st century, provides people with the great opportunity to see everything there is to see and to go any place there is to go. It has become a lifestyle for some people, and has turned out to be the driving force in GDP growth. It has the magic to turn a backward town into a wonderland of prosperity. But on the other hand, many problems can occur unexpectedly!
And the environmental problems rising from tourism are getting even worse than ever before!
In some districts，the environment has been largely contaminated：millions of tons of wastes are pouring into the environment alarmingly;the deforestation are still proceeding;the conservation areas of wild animals are disturbingly declining ……As a result ,the contradiction of the native people and wild lifes is deteriorating,so much so that the number of the people compelled to see a doctor are increasing tremendously!
At this point,it is high time that we adopted all possible and effective measures to cope well with this problem ,so as to make ourselves live in harmony with our environment!
So ,are you still hesitating?Let’s go hand in hand to make all things go right!
我给你谈谈怎样写作文吧
写作是本人的老本行！！六级作文115，我的英语老师多次在班上向同学推介我的作文，我的作文没有语法错误，有很多高级词汇。在这里跟阁下分享下吧
对于作文，我说的最多的就是：不走寻常路！你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文，拿来背背，你就成为高手了，其实大错特错！因为我看了之后也觉得一般，甚至有些拙劣，哗众取宠的味道，比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 这样低等的写作词汇，说它低等，那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知，阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了！
要写出高人一等的作文，我觉得并不难，只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇（越高级越好），写作句型，就足可以应对常规的高考，四六级考试……（我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别，四六级的作文都是110多分）
首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番！
其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇！给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上！
再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩！！关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
最后，我建议你，平时读报，或者做题的时候，发现有好的句子好的词汇，你要抄下来，长期下来，你的作文会有提高的，需要说明的是，这个提高过程可能很缓慢，但是最后能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别，靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇，句型，句子。
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