英语书面表达错误纠正 请看下面例子 请各位高手帮帮忙，明天考试要考到，非常急！！！！！！！！
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初一上学期，英语书面表达！急啊，快点，明天要上学了！5点之前要啊！~
我觉得有以上5个错误，其中错误1只要用横线划出就行，错误2、3、5属于时态语法错误，要根据该生以前是否学过这个知识点为根据，4是词汇积累方面不够。
因材施教，看这个学生平时的性格和自尊心等。没什么，因为他们不会才要学，只要讲解清楚，让学生明白为什么错，错在哪，再轻松说几句，学生反而会高兴的
“a bicycle” , years, was made, sometimes , 不好意思我只改出这几个，其他若有错请告诉我 我觉得低级错画出来，难一点的提醒一下引起以后的注意，千万不要打击他的自尊心让他失去对英语的兴趣。错误改出来总比他让他一直错下去好，多鼓励下他的进步就能激励他！
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Today is Monday ,he goes to work as usual.He is waiting the bus at the bus station.It is 7:30 am already,however,the bus has not come.Mr Black feels worried so that he does not notice that a thief named Jack is stealing his wallet.But luckily there is a policeman.Of course Jack is caught and Mr Black thanks the policeman very much.So we all should take care from now on!
My friend Yu Peng has a1 biclyle . He 2 bought it five yiears ago3. It is made in Wuhan. He bought it in a street market and ride it to school almost everyday. Sometimes 4he has to have it repaired. He said he was5 going to buy a new one made in Tianjin.我觉得有以上5个错误，其中错误1只要用横线划出就行，错误2、3、5属于时态语法错误，要根据该生以前是否学过这个知识点为根据，4是词汇积累方面不够。
因材施教，看这个学生平时的性格和自尊心等。没什么，因为他们不会才要学，只要讲解清楚，让学生明白为什么错，错在哪，再轻松说几句，学生反而会高兴的
“a bicycle” , years, was made, sometimes , 不好意思我只改出这几个，其他若有错请告诉我 我觉得低级错画出来，难一点的提醒一下引起以后的注意，千万不要打击他的自尊心让他失去对英语的兴趣。错误改出来总比他让他一直错下去好，多鼓励下他的进步就能激励他！
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